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| Submitted By: ToxicPixieDust* | Submitted: 11/03/09 |
| Rain. You love it, or hate it. Walking in the rain and getting drenched. The feel of the raindrops against my bare skins makes you feel so alive. The way it makes everything shimmer and sparkle. Splashing in puddles and having no dry socks at home. Laying down on the wet grass and watching the rain fall. The smell before and after it rains, it's smells so fresh, so new. Rain is so beautiful. The dark, dreadful clouds creeping into the sky early in the morning that can only promise one thing. And laying in bed that night, you can hear the faint rumbling of a storm. Dressing warmly for the bad weather. The splish splash of the water under your shoes. When a car turns a corner too fast, you can hear the squeal of the water against rubber. Everything about those dreary days are great. Sitting in class watching the raindrops bounce of the cement. The sounds of rain on the roof at night, keeping you up. You pull your jacket tighter, trying to keep in the warmth. Your shoes squish under your feet, pools of water collecting in your socks. You dream of the hot, summer days when you could wear shorts and tshirts...Now you're stuck with jeans and jackets. School seems like an escape from the continuous downpour. You hurry home, trying to stay dry. There's no way out of it. It's everywhere. The pitter patter of the raindrops start to annoy you. Pitter patter, pitter patter. It's all you hear. Where is the sun? You long for spring, winter even, as long as it makes the rain go away. You listen for the weather at home, rain again. Will it ever stop? Welcome to your nightmare. Weeks pass. Finally, a break in the clouds! Is that sun you see? The rain stops, you're free! But, the sun doesn't provide you with warmth. It's still cold outside. Later, the clouds come back darker than before. Rain again? Not this time...Welcome to Winter! | |
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| By: ,CARCRASH | Date: Nov 3, 2009 17:33:12 |
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So was this like a poem or a story or like what?
You should really break it into paragraphs or some shit. =/ |
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| By: ToxicPixieDust* | Date: Nov 3, 2009 19:26:42 |
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,CARCRASH
It was Creative Writing. |
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| By: MeTal*Alain | Date: Nov 4, 2009 0:29:44 |
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The feel of the raindrops against my bare skins makes you feel so alive
There`s a agreement mistake there. Are you talking you or me? It's pretty good. Probably could do with some different spacing though |
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| By: victoriaclarke, | Date: Nov 4, 2009 8:51:52 |
| how the fuck is this a poem? | |
| By: LAUGH;cry | Date: Nov 4, 2009 20:59:44 |
| I've read poems written like this.. it could be a poem. | |
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