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By: Duh-Uh-Ave Date: November 2, 2009, 6:39 pm
In a fake world there still is real pain. 
By: Mr.?. Date: November 2, 2009, 8:36 pm
Fake life+Fake love+fake heartbreak=fake Aftermath 
By: .CandY|sKabS. Date: November 2, 2009, 11:59 pm
At least your voices are friendly.
Your imaginary friends don't write in your journal while you think you're asleep and make plans to get you fired from your job and set you up with people who you think are your friends but really want to jump you on your way home.
o;;0
 
By: -{BigDates}- Date: November 3, 2009, 12:27 am
live life to its fullest every fuckinn day 
By: devigod Date: November 3, 2009, 12:43 am
all of u damn emos just need to get out of the basement go enjoy life 
By: Mr.?. Date: November 3, 2009, 1:25 am
devigod lmao
your a fucken joke man, its a poem

stupid Wangster you need to get off your highhorse and realize you arnt even worth shit 
By: labiaMINER, Date: November 3, 2009, 2:06 am
I'm most definitely not emo.
Not to mention I don't have a basement.
It's rather rude to blindly post labels.
 
By: **Sarah* Date: November 3, 2009, 4:03 am
i like it , good job . :)  
By: Hilles Date: November 3, 2009, 8:55 am
The world isn't fake its just filled with fake people. That's like saying our very existence is fake which doesn't make a whole lot of sense. Well written poem though good job. 
By: Skade Date: November 3, 2009, 1:35 pm
Flawed.

The real message?

Ignorance is bliss.
 
By: AnotherSuicide Date: November 4, 2009, 1:45 am
By: devigod Date: November 2, 2009, 5:43 pm
all of u damn emos just need to get out of the basement go enjoy life


Wow....first of all, there are millions of the people in the world who may hear voices in their head that are not "emo". It's funny how people use a word like "emo" so loosely that originated from a genre of music. How about grow up and educate yourself before trying to stereotype people. 
By: Carriere08 Date: November 4, 2009, 3:46 am
lol as funny as i thought that was, the whole emo thing, there right what the fuck man a fucking kid in grade 3 could have realized it was a god damn poem 
By: ~[C]heeky-ness~ Date: November 4, 2009, 6:23 am
A fake world seems fun till the voices turn on you and tell you one thing then the next.

Very good job on your poem I like it a lot Interesting way to put it. 
By: evildrummer Date: November 4, 2009, 9:45 am
If that's a poem...it's pretty awful. What is 'it' a manifestation of? I mean, you kind of just throw a bunch of ideas together and not in a particularly eloquent way....mmmmmmmmyeah. :P 
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