Well I write music lyrics though I may not be very good but meh
anything else u wanna know just ask
let me know what u think of these 2 songs

I like Speedmetal hard rock classic rock. I like playing guitar and making friends. haning out with friends and so on.
I also like to think I'm a good songs writer.... if you could be kind enough could you tell me what you think of this songs here.....


Refrain #1
I sit here on my stairs as I stare into space
Cuz I'm thinking of you every living moment
Life changed the day you siad goodbye
I sit with a tear on my face
You ask whats wrong
You'll always know and never understand
Course#1
I still love you with all my heart
I Still and always will
I wish I could stop loving you
I love you in a lost cuase
Refrain#2
I see them come and go
I feel your pain when your Depressed
I try to help you through it all
All the while I'm hurting in my own soul
I ask you whats wrong When I can tell your down
You always shrug and say nothing at all
It hurts to see you this way
But it's more to know you just cannot say
I need you, need you to help me please
Course#2
I still love you with all my heart
Istill and always will
I wish I could stop loving you
I love you in a lost cuase
Refain#3
Love comes and goes so they say
It doesn't seem to apply here and now
Cuz I feel my love for you is here to stay
That it refuses to just leave for good forever
To sta-------------------------->y
Course#3
I still love you with all my heart
Istill and always will
I wish I could stop loving you today
But it's here to stay
Repeat Course #3
I still love you with all my heart
Istill and always will
I wish I could stop loving you today
But it's here to stay
Closing
I love you, always have always will
From now til the day I die
We will be friends forever always
I know this from your eyes
Cuz your eyes are true and bright
And could never be a lie


The Fear Inside
Refrain#1
I miss when you were in my arms babe
I miss that extreme bliss
what I wouldn't give to hold you
feel that tender tasting kiss

Coruse#1
there is no fear like the fear inside
inside my heart and in deep
in my soul that terror that fear
of being without you here
in my life in my arms

Refrain#2

Love is a treatrous feeling
you fall for it when you are weakening
then it cuts ya deeper than your soul
and leaves you bleeding
for that person that you thought would never go

Coruse#2
there is no fear like the fear inside
inside my heart and in deep
in my soul that terror that fear
of being without you here
in my life in my arms

Refrain#3

I had love in my life in my soul
then I lost her too my world
I wish I could tell or know why
she left me on that cold cold day
I see that fear of loss everyday now
the rain is the 1 thing that hides the tears on my face
I feel I have lost my life and my soul

Coruse#3

there is no fear like the fear inside
inside my heart and in deep
in my soul that terror that fear
of being without you here
in my life in my arms

Refrain#4

now I see that is not over life is not done
although you have left me and moved on
I'm just cought in this time the moment
the days when I called you mine
but those days have bin lost and have gone
I will move on the day I realize
that I'm not the place for love
in your ey-------------es



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