the amazing Crystalline Green Flying Machine
a black title card appears: "Crystalline Green Flying Machine"
the time is 2:13pm
steam rises from the hood of a broken down car
a teenage boy is leaning on the hood
he is his mid teens and is now walking through the forest on a park trail alone, he is NATE, he is wearing a zip up hoodie, red tshirst and regular denim jeans.
all is silent
he walks along a small pond as the light reflects on his face, he sits down on the grass and doesnt really enjoy a calm peaceful moment. . . something is up
4:45pm
its getting darker and he is walking through a country field by himself still, looking left and right, spinning a 360 and putting his hands in his pockets, he sees something among the hills
it sort of glides still
the object is bright green but silent
he runs and hides behind an old barn
looks out
the crystalline green machine is slowly lowering itself down into the hills, its hardly noticeable at all, just a speck in the horizon
he runs back into the forest
he enters a clearing
all is silent
he sits down in a random patch amongst the forest
title card - 6:43pm
over the black title card we hear him
CUT TO: him now running through the forest
we can hear the machine coming closer to him
he breaks out of the forest and is now out onto the field
the machine is VERY close behind him
he JUMPS down behind a piece of machinery
as it passes by him and heads off into the distance.
we end this part with him laying on his chest beside an old piece of machinery his hands almost covering his face, he is very dirty now, but not as dirty as what has yet to happen.
he collapses onto the ground
A BLACK TITLE CARD - "6:45pm"
he sits up, its very dark out now
we can see around in the dark blue surrounding him, everything is either blue or black except for the glowing missile like object heading over him by about a mile above him, its just like a slow moving speck against the dark sky
he pulls himself together, wipes his face just to smear more dirt on it than there already was
wipes his pants
his shirt
his back
and his hair
he is now walking along a country back road
we hear his feet making crunching sounds in the gravel road
then he stops
we hear the same crunching sound spread out 45 times more. . . coming towards him
he jumps into the ditch and into the bushes below the road and crawls into the upright fetal shock position
we hear the crunching sounds coming closer followed by vocal sounds
the crunching turns into marching boots, the vocal sounds are jogging
(every step we hear a "Hei")
he creeps lower into the bushes
the sound comes closer
the sound and marching soldiers comes, then goes into the distance
theyre gone for sure
he RUNS down the country road
BLACK TITLE CARD "3:47am"
we see Nate, Asleep in a barn amongst the hay, it is still dark but more of a light blue kind of dark
he looks around and we get POV shots from him, looking at the various bails of hay and metal devices attached to the barn walls
EXT BARN - Morning
he steps out, muddy as hell, and twice as suspicious
he creeps around the barn, looking around the corner, once. . . twice. . . then BOLTS to the patio door of the farmhouse
INT FARMHOUSE
its quiet. . .
the patio door SLAMS OPEN
he steps in, it SLAMS SHUT
the house is eerily quiet. not one sound
he goes to the sink and begins to clean himself off in a very archaic style with dishsoap and a cloth
he enters the washroom, and we hear a flush then a faucet
the washroom door opens slowly, he peers out into the quiet hallway
its all silent
he creeps down the hallway to the end bedroom
he opens the door
and hears a SCREAM
the door beside him FLIES OPEN and a FARMER holding a CLEAVER stands there
the farmers family is hiding in the side room
nate starts backing down the hallway
we hear a whistle when. . .
the farmers BEDROOM EXPLODES INWARD with pieces of WOOD and DEBRIS as nate fuckin RUNS outta there
the screams can be heard as he runs out of the house and across the field, and into the forest
a black title card appears: "Crystalline Green Flying Machine"
the time is 2:13pm
steam rises from the hood of a broken down car
a teenage boy is leaning on the hood
he is his mid teens and is now walking through the forest on a park trail alone, he is NATE, he is wearing a zip up hoodie, red tshirst and regular denim jeans.
all is silent
he walks along a small pond as the light reflects on his face, he sits down on the grass and doesnt really enjoy a calm peaceful moment. . . something is up
4:45pm
its getting darker and he is walking through a country field by himself still, looking left and right, spinning a 360 and putting his hands in his pockets, he sees something among the hills
it sort of glides still
the object is bright green but silent
he runs and hides behind an old barn
looks out
the crystalline green machine is slowly lowering itself down into the hills, its hardly noticeable at all, just a speck in the horizon
he runs back into the forest
he enters a clearing
Nate
HELLO!
HELLO!
all is silent
Nate
CAN ANYBODY HEAR ME?
CAN ANYBODY HEAR ME?
he sits down in a random patch amongst the forest
title card - 6:43pm
over the black title card we hear him
NATE V.O
oh shiiiiiit
oh shiiiiiit
CUT TO: him now running through the forest
we can hear the machine coming closer to him
he breaks out of the forest and is now out onto the field
the machine is VERY close behind him
he JUMPS down behind a piece of machinery
as it passes by him and heads off into the distance.
we end this part with him laying on his chest beside an old piece of machinery his hands almost covering his face, he is very dirty now, but not as dirty as what has yet to happen.
he collapses onto the ground
A BLACK TITLE CARD - "6:45pm"
FEMALE V.O
at this current broadcast time
we leave you with an estimated
6.9 million dead in the western front
alone-
at this current broadcast time
we leave you with an estimated
6.9 million dead in the western front
alone-
he sits up, its very dark out now
we can see around in the dark blue surrounding him, everything is either blue or black except for the glowing missile like object heading over him by about a mile above him, its just like a slow moving speck against the dark sky
he pulls himself together, wipes his face just to smear more dirt on it than there already was
wipes his pants
his shirt
his back
and his hair
he is now walking along a country back road
we hear his feet making crunching sounds in the gravel road
then he stops
we hear the same crunching sound spread out 45 times more. . . coming towards him
he jumps into the ditch and into the bushes below the road and crawls into the upright fetal shock position
we hear the crunching sounds coming closer followed by vocal sounds
the crunching turns into marching boots, the vocal sounds are jogging
Vocal
Hei, Hei, Hei, Hei
Hei, Hei, Hei, Hei
(every step we hear a "Hei")
he creeps lower into the bushes
the sound comes closer
Vocal
HEI HEI HEI HEI
HEI HEI HEI HEI
the sound and marching soldiers comes, then goes into the distance
theyre gone for sure
he RUNS down the country road
BLACK TITLE CARD "3:47am"
we see Nate, Asleep in a barn amongst the hay, it is still dark but more of a light blue kind of dark
he looks around and we get POV shots from him, looking at the various bails of hay and metal devices attached to the barn walls
EXT BARN - Morning
he steps out, muddy as hell, and twice as suspicious
he creeps around the barn, looking around the corner, once. . . twice. . . then BOLTS to the patio door of the farmhouse
INT FARMHOUSE
its quiet. . .
the patio door SLAMS OPEN
he steps in, it SLAMS SHUT
the house is eerily quiet. not one sound
he goes to the sink and begins to clean himself off in a very archaic style with dishsoap and a cloth
he enters the washroom, and we hear a flush then a faucet
the washroom door opens slowly, he peers out into the quiet hallway
Nate
Hu. . Hello?
Hu. . Hello?
its all silent
he creeps down the hallway to the end bedroom
he opens the door
and hears a SCREAM
the door beside him FLIES OPEN and a FARMER holding a CLEAVER stands there
FARMER
Git the FUCK off MA PROPERTY!
Nate
im so sorry sir. . its just there was this thing and these
guys running and i needed somewhere to go and
Farmer
i dont know where ya shitkickin city folks come up with
that, but i dont
Nate
Please!
Farmer
looky, ill give you five seconds to git outta this place, ya hear?
Git the FUCK off MA PROPERTY!
Nate
im so sorry sir. . its just there was this thing and these
guys running and i needed somewhere to go and
Farmer
i dont know where ya shitkickin city folks come up with
that, but i dont
Nate
Please!
Farmer
looky, ill give you five seconds to git outta this place, ya hear?
the farmers family is hiding in the side room
Farmer
YA HEAR?
YA HEAR?
nate starts backing down the hallway
Nate
okay. .
Farmer
Five. . .Four. .
okay. .
Farmer
Five. . .Four. .
we hear a whistle when. . .
the farmers BEDROOM EXPLODES INWARD with pieces of WOOD and DEBRIS as nate fuckin RUNS outta there
the screams can be heard as he runs out of the house and across the field, and into the forest
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