AmericanPimp - 22, Male, Stony Plain
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I small love poem =)
If I looked at you in the eye
Would you fall into a trance or give me a dirty look?

If I gave you my hand
would you take it or leave it as it falls to grace?

If I gave you my heart
Would you hold it gently forever or would you crush it with all your might?

If I let you touch my soul
Would you feel the light and love or would you rip it out onto the ground?

If I stayed forever with you
Would you stay or leave me with a mirrior of myself?
 

COMMENTS
sunfire1595 - 21, Female, Calgary
05:02am | Jan 27, '09
wow this is really good
i like it
~lindsey
05:06am | Jan 27, '09
~lindsey
AMAZING
love it!
{-M-}anderz;; - 21, Female, Cold Lake
06:38am | Jan 27, '09
Alex.... that was awesome.
So Happy u finally she wasnt good enough for u.
happytreefriend
10:02am | Jan 27, '09
happytreefriend
awe... alex that was incredible it sounds like something very personal to u
AmericanPimp - 22, Male, Stony Plain
09:23pm | Jan 27, '09
no not really i just worte it when some random person wrote something like that to tons of people.
it wasn't nearly as good though it was kinda lame.
but influenced me to write my own

Its notthing personal at all
--winnie-- - 18, Female, Toronto
09:24pm | Jan 27, '09

umm really good!
Havent talked to you in forever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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