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So this is how the story ends....... (an old poem I wrote a year ago)

11:08pm | Apr 28, '09 | Public

If I was to grab her by the hand
Even put my arms around her neck
Would she understand?
Or not have a clue what love really ment?

Love isnt what it once was
Whats the point of it?
Is there still a meaning to life?
Or shall we rule the world with our idioticy.......

Its true what they all say.....
All that shimmers in this world
Really does fadeaway...... Again.... and Again...

I guess love will once again fadeaway
Will it be forever this time?
Or will we once again know what we need to breathe
To breathe it all..... She is my oxygen
And they are my Carbon Dioxide, killing me
And keeping her from me......

If only I could have her
Then I would have it all
And all I need to live
Is all I'll ever breathe
As I would Breathe my last breath for her and only her
Forever I am around her, I am alive inside

And you all thought you knew me? think again!
I wont let yall controll me
Dont try it anymore!

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	12:05am \| Apr 29, '09 sunfire1595 this is really good
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	12:08am \| Apr 29, '09 AmericanPimp thank you
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	09:25pm \| Apr 29, '09 sunfire1595 You are most welcome
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	01:07am \| Apr 29, '09 --winnie-- you wrote this O=
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	04:33am \| Apr 29, '09 AmericanPimp yes I did... a long time ago well a year or two ago
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	11:08am \| Apr 29, '09 --winnie-- well its good
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	09:56pm \| Apr 29, '09 AmericanPimp thanks both of you
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	08:04pm \| Jul 18, '09 laurr101 this is pree' damn good ;]
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01:16am | Oct 24, '09

xOneelam.

OMG no way, i write poetryy too !
there just not all saved here, there mostly at school : P
thats soooooo cool .
XD been told this " , andd its like i was born with such thoughtful andcreative heart
warming words " all thatstuff, =P but youu should figure out for your self hehe! but i do write from the hearttttttt, and im in a thing called poetry slam , its very popular. P.S your poetry is so cute!
loove !

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	02:50am \| Oct 24, '09 AmericanPimp I never herd of Poetry slam? What is that? And thank you!!!!!! Yeah I write from the heart too, and that too gets me in trouble XD! But its not fair when your only being honest right? You gotta show me your stuff someday
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02:58am | Oct 24, '09

xOneelam.

aweeh =D haha, LOL i dont get in trouble when im write from the heart.
and poetry slam is somthing at my highschool every wensdays,
people go to the theathree room and people read hilarious poetry
likee really good stuff, like the song boom boom poww was played but not rlly poetry..
alot of great cool stuff, everyone laughed so I guess it was success

and i know im going to show you my stuff one day !

i just discovered something , we have someefingg in coommaann
we both love poetry, & mainly mines about a boy or " lovee "
<3

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	03:16am \| Oct 24, '09 AmericanPimp haha wow thats amazing I'm more in to songs to be honest you know like music writing lyircs and stuff? I don't do it much though, I got a few! PLus its allot harder to do in a way and yeah thats just crazy though I can't wait to see it!
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