Duh-Uh-Ave - 23, Male, Peace River
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Get Back(up) up.
He saw his own blood inches away from his eyeball, for that split-second it hung there, a perfect sphere made all the more brilliant by the clouds of tear gas and the pulsating blue and red lights in the immediate background. Followed immediately by crippling pain of the officer's club on the highest part of his cheekbone. The last thing he saw was pavement.

A cascade of images washed over him, his first temper tantrum, his first skinned knee, his first time in the penalty box, his first car crash, his first witnessed death.

Once again pavement. He felt two hands grab the back of his arm, all of the sudden he was back to his feet, everything was in slow-motion, an angry mob and riot police. Molotovs exchanged with rubber bullets.

"Don't fight me son." A voice said so close to him he could feel the breath. The chill of defeat radiated up his spine from the ratcheting shut of handcuffs on his left wrist. Like a flash, without hesitation his right fist met the face that was restraining him, the officer winced and took a knee, as the tip of a steel toed work boot met his throat and forced him on his back. choking on his own blood he grabbed his radio and garbled "fifteen at three o' clock."

Turning around, the young man shouted "WE ARE NOT NUMBERS, WE ARE NAMES!" Met only with the empty shrill of sirens and a voice over the loud speaker "cease and desist you are all under arrest." A trail of smoke and a hissing sound accompanied by the twang as a fresh tear gas can lands at his feet, the young man scoops the can bolting ahead of the crowd, and throws it right back. "WE ARE NOT CRIME REPORTS WE ARE HISTORY!"
 
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HatchetxMan
07:51pm | Dec 10, '09
HatchetxMan
So he saw the blood BEFORE he hit the pavement? Thats some pretty tricky eyeball action
Duh-Uh-Ave - 23, Male, Peace River
08:04pm | Dec 10, '09
Or one hard swing.
HatchetxMan
08:23pm | Dec 10, '09
HatchetxMan
lol, that guys got some super human strength!
x420smurf., - 17, Female, Victoria
09:54pm | Dec 10, '09
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME.
seriously. that just blew my mind. damn.
irony; - 19, Female, Creston
10:12pm | Dec 10, '09
I quite enjoyed that, your choice of words was very well developed and only helped put more emphasis into the feeling of the article. I liked your style near the end as well, good job!



*720* - 23, Male, Calgary
03:49am | Dec 11, '09
I already know your talents. Great job, man.
Smokeygal14 - 21, Female, Afghanistan
05:23am | Dec 11, '09
The only thing bugging me is the switch from past to present tense in the last line.
Was that intentional? If so, what for?
beach121 - 18, Female, Edmonton
09:51am | Dec 11, '09
You just blew my mind .

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